During the tutorial Steve has given me feedback of my Draft of the proposal. For example, one of the issues I had was to do with inconsistencies in relation to design of the proposal itself. As on one page the gutter was different than on the other. Also, I have been told that the Gantt Chart is too small. Thus, needs scaling up and improving so it is easily accessible. Another feedback point I have been given was to improve my career aspiration section as well as ethics and rights. To evaluate more upon them and maybe construct a plan of action after Uni. When looking at my User Scenario section i need to include a Brand Touchpoint Matrix which was developed by Hello Future company to help companies visualise how the customer might find the company. From the feedback I have been working on improving the proposal by setting up a master page with page numbers and stripes to make sure that all of the pages are consistent so they show unity and cohesion.