Steve's Tutorial

 During today's tutorial we have been going through my draft proposal for the degree project. And what i would need to improve in order to make it better. After the tutorial i have improved it by exploring further my cultural context of the coffee place as I researched the history of the coffee and where did it come from. As well as I found out that in the 17th Century coffee houses were seen as places where people would come in together and discuss important and deep religious problems. 

Also, from the feedback received I had to improve my target audience section to be precise reshuffling it in order to make the better paragraph first that was more representative of my idea. 

As well as I have added in the ideas section two paragraphs about rejected ideas which didn't make it as they were either not feasible or did not have as much potential in them. In the final version of the proposal i am planning to add in paragraph about the ideas that did not make it to the final version of the project/app whether would it be due to lack of time or issues that would rise along the way.